temperature

showing not telling

27.8.14  The  car crashed  on  the  road
The  big  12  seater  van  flipped  onto   the neighbours driveway  and  did   a   face  plant on  its  roof   and   the  traffic   was  unable to pass.

Cross Country Race

When   we   go   out    to   cross   country  training I  have  to   run  at least  4  laps.What  I find challenging is that it is really hard not to walk when I am really hot and tired. When  I am really tired and  I see my friends  past me I also hear my teacher telling  me not to stop. This makes me keep on being resilient and running. My goal  for cross country is  not  to stop running when I  am hot.

controlled flight

circuit poem

When  we  go  out  to  circuits  for exercise I  can   see    people  running   and   kicking and jumping
I can    hear   lots of huffing and puffing and feet thumping on the ground
I can smell wet sand and wet puddles on the ground and fresh air from the sky
I touch the ground, the wall and the circuit activities
I taste the water from the tap at the end of our circuits                              

my goals

My goals   for  this   term   is  writing    neater. Another   one   of   my   goals   is    to   stop    talking  when   i   am   wroking   and    when   the   teacher    is   talking.

My pattern poem

   Chocolate
melted  chocolate
sticky  melted  chocolate
marshmallows in melted chocolate
marshmallow's  with  chocolate and  with  crackers