Tuesday, 16 September 2014

Saving the kitten



One day  some fireman got called  out to an emergency. There was a burning house. The fire was really big because there were  lots  of firetrucks. Their  lights and sirens were  on. There was a man  in his  big  heavy fire suit. He  went  inside  the house to  see  if  anyone  was still inside and needed to be rescued. But then the fireman  found a tiny unconscious kitten. He  rushed  it outside and helped it come back to life.

Tuesday, 9 September 2014

When I was sick

On  Satuday   when  I  woke  up  I   felt   really  sick  I  went to  my  mum  and  dad  and   they   told  me   I  have  to  stay  in  bed . When  we   were  in the room me and my brother were watching  t.v  and   I  felt a little better  on  Tuesday  when I cough  my throat  feels  sore. 

Tuesday, 26 August 2014

showing not telling

27.8.14  The  car crashed  on  the  road
The  big  12  seater  van  flipped  onto   the neighbours driveway  and  did   a   face  plant on  its  roof   and   the  traffic   was  unable to pass.

Tuesday, 19 August 2014

Cross Country Race

When   we   go   out    to   cross   country  training I  have  to   run  at least  4  laps.What  I find challenging is that it is really hard not to walk when I am really hot and tired. When  I am really tired and  I see my friends  past me I also hear my teacher telling  me not to stop. This makes me keep on being resilient and running. My goal  for cross country is  not  to stop running when I  am hot.

Tuesday, 29 July 2014

circuit poem


When  we  go  out  to  circuits  for exercise I  can   see    people  running   and   kicking and jumping
I can    hear   lots of huffing and puffing and feet thumping on the ground
I can smell wet sand and wet puddles on the ground and fresh air from the sky
I touch the ground, the wall and the circuit activities
I taste the water from the tap at the end of our circuits